"What we do in this life, echoes in eternity."
Maximus, Gladiator
"Our creator would never have made such lovely days, and given us the deep hearts to enjoy them, above all thought, unless we were meant to be immortal."
Nathaniel Hawthorne

Wednesday, April 28, 2010

Fire Water

Mt short story "Fire Water" is up on the Utah Children's Writers Blog. I hope you enjoy it. Leave a comment!

7 comments:

  1. I'll go check it out! =)

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  2. Yamile, I left a comment. I do love your voice. I'm sorry if I was harsh at our first go around at our round table--with the many years of writing, I've been told that I couldn't write so literarilly. *Sigh*

    I get so many confusing messages on what is right and wrong, I guess we just need to be true to ourselves. What do you think?

    Great writing! :)

    PS--I really enjoyed meeting you and having you at my table! I hope we can get to know each other better! Are you on facebook? Look me up: elizabeth martinez mueller

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  3. PS--thanks for finding me and following my blog!! :D ((Hugs))

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  4. Holaaaaa!!!

    I just read your short story! I've NEVER read anything regarding marine bioluminescence, but your spin on it was just so refreshing, unique, and I really wanted to know what happened next. Thanks for making my day a lot better, Yamile.


    And congrats on getting the story out there! I'm sure many adoring fans are gonna pop up real soon :D

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  5. oo awesome!! clicking over right now!!

    (and congrats!!)

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  6. No worries Elizabeth. I really appreciate your comments. I know literary isn't everyone's cup of tea, but it's the voice my character speak, and I must obey. Let's keep in touch!

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  7. You are so talented. I'm a bit jealous, writing has never been a strong suit of mine but I love to read. Have you written more to that story?

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